I have been playing around with the wording for my text.
I know I want to keep all titles in the original German. Right now I am trying to use both English and German in the text. One idea is to rewrite the poems in more modern language and switch off between English and German. For example:
Der Struwwelpeter
Long hair and longer nails.
Gesicht schwarz wie die Nacht.
All alone.
Niemand will zu spielen mit Peter.
Another idea would be to have no linear narrative but rather just words in the two languages that are descriptive enough to tell the story without sentence structure.
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